Hello lately I have been working on my narrative writing in whea Reawyn and i have been doing this for about three weeks now and I've loved it
The Storm
Stella Coles-Toki
Smashing through the waves, pushing and pulling back and forth again and again making me feel sea sick. Once the sun is slowly rising the water changes colour. A beautiful orange glow shimmering on the top of the water. It tastes like salt flakes splashing in my mouth, the refreshing sea water brushing through the middle of my fingers and creating an amazing mist covering my whole face. After hours and hours go past watching Majestic sea animals jumping up and down. A while has gone past and we can all see a roaring storm approaching the grey clouds gathering about to attack with their frightening lightning strikes. The clouds are as dark as a shark's eye. The whole waka shakes. All I hear is everyone shouting but I can't understand anything they are saying. I thought I felt sea sick before I was so wrong I was throwing up everywhere I thought I was going to die. This went on for days. I was so relieved to see light finally it felt so nice to have the glow all over my skin, the fish were jumping. It was the perfect summer day and everyone cheered with joy. The chef said “Not far to go now”
Right then was the happiest moment from the whole trip hearing those five words, I couldn't wait to feel stable ground under my feet. Everyone said that right when we get off we are going to have a massive fest. I miss a good fest, haven't had one of them for a couple months now. I could see the soft golden sand. I couldn't wait so I cannonball into the beautiful crystal blue water. It felt fresh and crisp. It felt so amazing. I ran onto sore twirling round and round, slamming onto the ground with enjoyment and making sand angels. I never felt more alive. It finally came to the time for kia i was amazing the meat fell off the bone and the potatoes melted in my mouth this will differently the most remembered trip of my life.
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